2GB for a 0.02.0 version seem to be a little bit too much tough. I suppose you still use png for images and not webp. You should learn how to compress the game better.
By the way, it's very cool, that you provide download link through google drive, and not mega. But google drive links don't always work, especially if many people downloaded the game recently, so I suggest you to add some alternative download methods, for example mediafire.
I can say it’s a nice game after an hour of playing. It has a good pace and speed telling. There are so many characters… They look unique within the game. They may be hard to develop, but for now I don’t see any problems here.
That magic font looks cool, and I could see its translation on the History page. There are characters and events pages, but they were somehow hard to find. Could you add icons of these windows to the main story window? You know, heart and scroll/book icon.
You have to find some beta readers. The game has too many errors. They aren’t so critical, but numerous. Wrong letters in some words, too low-quality punctuation or its absence, and letters in upper and low cases (The main pretension is the word “I”. You should always write it like this “I”, but in 80% of cases it goes as “i”. There were these type problems with other words).
Thank you for playing and your suggestions. I'll have to look into making some extra ways to the event screens other than the quick menu. I know about the grammar Issues and have been working to fix all of them. When they're fixed reading should be a much better experience.
I can suggest these browser extensions “Grammarly” and “Grammar Checker and Text Rewriter — Linguix”. They help me a lot with writing texts. Although they are only for internet browsers.
Another issue I forgot to mention is the game size. It has 2 Gb, it’s too much for version 0.01. Try to compress images and videos.
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Thanks, downloading it now :)
2GB for a 0.02.0 version seem to be a little bit too much tough. I suppose you still use png for images and not webp. You should learn how to compress the game better.
By the way, it's very cool, that you provide download link through google drive, and not mega. But google drive links don't always work, especially if many people downloaded the game recently, so I suggest you to add some alternative download methods, for example mediafire.
I found an error in the event Nya.
While running game code: File “game/script.rpy”, line 4324, in script with dissolve(.5) TypeError: ‘Dissolve’ object is not callable
Thank you for letting me know. It'll be alright to ignore that error for now. It'll be fixed in the next update
I can say it’s a nice game after an hour of playing. It has a good pace and speed telling. There are so many characters… They look unique within the game. They may be hard to develop, but for now I don’t see any problems here.
That magic font looks cool, and I could see its translation on the History page. There are characters and events pages, but they were somehow hard to find. Could you add icons of these windows to the main story window? You know, heart and scroll/book icon.
You have to find some beta readers. The game has too many errors. They aren’t so critical, but numerous. Wrong letters in some words, too low-quality punctuation or its absence, and letters in upper and low cases (The main pretension is the word “I”. You should always write it like this “I”, but in 80% of cases it goes as “i”. There were these type problems with other words).
Thank you for playing and your suggestions. I'll have to look into making some extra ways to the event screens other than the quick menu. I know about the grammar Issues and have been working to fix all of them. When they're fixed reading should be a much better experience.
I can suggest these browser extensions “Grammarly” and “Grammar Checker and Text Rewriter — Linguix”. They help me a lot with writing texts. Although they are only for internet browsers.
Another issue I forgot to mention is the game size. It has 2 Gb, it’s too much for version 0.01. Try to compress images and videos.
Grammarly can be added as an addon to Microsoft Word or you can use their webapp via browser.